The Wisconsin Regional Writer
Volume 55, Number 2        Summer 2006

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Spring Conference (Appleton) Speaker Reviews

Writing for Children without Writing Down to Them—Judith Logan Lehne

by Bill Bright

Saturday, the sixth of May, was a gorgeous day. It was a little on the cool side-just the right temperature for bull work in the garden-and the sun was ablaze. When I opened the garage door to back the car out and strike out for Appleton and the WRWA Writers' Conference I heard birds at my feeder discussing the buffet. Why in the name of Tsiehta, the Prince of Reason, am I going to a hotel to sit inside, out of the sunlight, when I have this beautiful spring day?

Well, as it turned out there were several reasons, not least of which was Judith Logan Lehne. Judith, an award-winning writer who has written over 70 articles and stories, five plays, and wrote or collaborated on at least seven books of interest to children-The Busy Mom's Book of Quick Crafts for Kids; When the Ragman Sings; The Never-Be-Bored Book: Quick Things to Make When There's Nothing to Do; Kangaroos for Kids; Kangaroos: Kangaroo Magic for Kids; The Wonder of Kangaroos; and Coyote Girl-brought meaning to being inside on a beautiful day.

She woke us up with “attitude food”-candy and gum, a little sugar buzz to keep us awake after lunch-and talked to us about “rekindling curiosity.” If you want to write for children and not to them, Judith says:

Become the child. Get down to his level and look up into adult noses. Know the child's world from the child's perspective. Live in the child's skin, and feel the child's emotions.

Create child characters that are believable to children; you can't fool them. Borrow somebody's children if you don't have any of your own.

Highlights of Judith's hints:

You have to like kids

It's their world, not yours: physically different, close enough to the ground to be able to see bubble gum under a casket; difficult for them to tie shoes or make beds; and emotionally different and unique

Every story requires conflict, even non-fiction.

Get rid of the Wise-Guy Grownup. Children must figure things out without grownup help if they are to stay engaged.

Beware of preaching and moral messages.

Show, don't tell.

Yes, I'd say that was reason enough to come in out of the sun.


John Mutter—Liftestyle Experiences to Help Freelance Writing

by Dawn Mork

John Mutter has been writing for 25 years. He has published many articles and essays in several periodicals and has written two books.

He gave us an interesting view into the many jobs and experiences that have formed his background and that frequently provided the insights for his articles.

John dedicated his writing to his mother who passed earlier this year and was his biggest fan.

Though he was introduced as a writer with a file of 285 rejection letters, he reminded us the number has expanded with his submissions to this year's Lindeman and Nelson competitions.

Mr. Mutter assured the audience that he would provide information and experiences that would inspire and motivate. But in case someone should think of falling asleep, he shared with us his enormous slingshot loaded with black walnuts. He assured all that he was not afraid to use it when he exclaimed, "Make my day.”

Acquiring a copy of The Wisconsin Blue Book was another suggestion of his. It is available free from your state representatives and is loaded with useful and interesting information.

One habit he encouraged everyone to practice, was to keep a file of interesting ideas and experiences as they may someday provide information and inspiration. He encouraged us to “write what you know,” but also to get out and experience and learn things that will bring ideas into ones realm of experience.

He told us we should always remember that we had been given a gift, to investigate anything that appears curious or unusual, and to persevere and remain determined as he said, "The world needs us."


Krish Radish—Creating Memorable Characters in Fiction

by Evelyn Kane

Kris Radish, self-proclaimed “recovering journalist,” gave a rollicking presentation of ten tips for creating real characters in fiction. In addition to countless feature articles and two non-fiction books, Radish has published a slew of novels in rapid succession, most recently Searching for Paradise in Parker, PA. Her latest book, The Sunday Lists of Dreams, is scheduled to appear in 2007.

Radish urged writers to take time to get to know characters before letting them “airbrush themselves into reality.” They should “breathe into your ear” and have distinct voices.

  1. Who are your characters and what do they look like inside your head? Know their physical characteristics down to the color of their eyes.
  2. Where are they from? Where did they grow up? What happened to them in their childhood?
  3. Have a fake conversation with your characters. What do they do for a living? Why? What do they love? Hate?
  4. Make believe you are your main character and walk through an entire day as her or him.
  5. What do your characters believe in and how does that relate to what they do?
  6. Who are your characters' friends and enemies? If someone hates them, why?
  7. Describe a character to someone and then role-play an interview: hear the character talk to or through you.
  8. Ask: “What if?” Let your characters go off on unpredictable paths.
  9. What are your characters' goals? What transformations will they undergo and why should readers care?
  10. Outline the mistakes and motivations of your characters. Why do they want what they want, and what is in the way of their goals?

Audience members had the opportunity to jot down their own character sketches, and get up and read what they'd written. What WRWA members came up with in a matter of minutes was amazing and amusing. The questions and answer period included useful words of support:

  • Surround yourself with the works of other authors: they are your muses. The best way to find your voice is to be a good reader.
  • Think about how some day you might write something that will change someone's life.
  • If you have a passion for writing, it's going to happen.
  • Write from a place that is real.
  • Finally: Don't worry about what you think you're supposed to be writing, just sit down and start writing!

Radish's entertaining and highly educational presentation left me inspired and motivated.

 

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